Recap – Well, then, let’s get right into it! We have no time to waste buddy!” replied Amfrodeth.
“The Story begins with all of us merrily playing around in Tinsin’s park, it all seemed ordinary. None of us ever suspected that any of the following tragic events would occur. A fraction of minutes later, our majesty, Queen Kartier Komon, had an announcement to make. She stood on the pedestal of the great, held out a shiny gold mic, and started on with her speech. ‘My dear citizens of Fremp World, today being fremp republic day, we shall call all our great servicemen to honor them.’ We all had forgotten that it was our Republic day! Not long after, the warriors of our world begin marching out from the great castle. They all had their pink glittery uniforms with their names on a badge pinned to their shirts. All the soldiers stood before us, which meant that our world’s borders were unsecured. Venheiter Preslin took this as an opportunity and entered the world. No one knew what was going to happen in a few minutes. The world was going to turn upside down! Shortly after, a black tornado came swarming over, not a soul had any idea what was going on. The critters started whispering among themselves. The tornado shallowed, and there she was! A cloud of smoke with a face and hands but no legs. Her teeth were blackened and she had creepy red eyes! Creepy! Well then, you can guess what happened after that. She overthrew the queen and made all the enslaved people her servant. This is the only sector in the entire world that is not burnt or blackened! It’s hidden! This region right here is invisible.” with that Amfrodeth ended her story. Teddy spoke up, “Well, Liz, we need you to help us with this.” “I’ll try to help every creature in this world and save them !” “Thank you, thank you so much” said Herlamenth. “Well then, let’s get going. Get your war backpacks ready and we shall leave at this moment.” spoke Mickey.
Liz took the backpack she had bought from our world. They all slowly exited the top-secret place. The dome transparent slowly disappeared, and all of them landed up in the same black and burning land Liz and Teddy had teleported to through the first portal. The place was dry, and the air was suffocating. Liz coughed and coughed until her body was physically able to cough more. Not long after, Teddy spoke up, “We all have figured a way to enter the castle, we need something to destroy her, and that’s where you come in, Liz. We have a strong jute rope, which will be used once we go through the secret passage, it is meant to be placed right above her head in such a manner that it creates a swing. As you’re from another world, Venheiter Preslin won’t be able to harm you. We would really appreciate it if you would throw Mink gun rolls at her. Mink gun rolls are a gun that shoots mink drink. Mink drink is Venheiter’s only weakness.” “I shall help you do it, I would love to Help y’all save your world.” said Liz.
Everything after this went as planned. The castle was dark and filled with skulls used as lamps. The time had come. Liz stood on the swing, with the critters exciting her up. She held a Mink gun roll and aimed for a bit. She squinted her eyes, looked at the target, and threw the mink gun right at the throne made of skinny bones with Venheiter, or a black smoke cloud, with red clothing and body parts sitting there. Liz’s aim was perfect. The gun directly went and hit Venheiter’s head. The drink smashed on Venheiter, but it didn’t seem to affect her. She flipped her head back, Gave a creepy smile, and flew towards Liz. In a deep low voice, she said, “You can’t destroy me with a mink drink u, foolish child, I have worked on my weaknesses, and you cannot ever destroy me HAHAHA!” Liz gulped in fear. She quickly held onto her bag while the others looked at her, concerned. Just as they were about to jump in to save Liz, Liz secretly motioned her hand, telling them to stay there. She had to do something quickly! Venheiter’s gaze was fixed on Liz. Just as Liz was about to speak up, her throat felt dry, and she had to drink water. She was panicking but knew that Venheiter could not hurt her. So she slowly unzipped her bag, took her water bottle out, and started drinking water.
As she gulped the water down, a tiny droplet fell on Venheiter, and it started to smoke. Venheiter screamed in fear, “What did you do to me, you stupid little girl.” Liz knew at this moment that water was the only thing that could fix this, water! Without hesitation, she held the bottle and splashed it all over Venheiter. “NOOOOOOOOOOOOO” Venheiter screamed in a monotonous voice. She was slowly disappearing into thin air while smoke filled the room. All of them stood there coughing, with their eyes closed. By the time Liz opened her eyes, she was back in her room, and Teddy had disappeared, and then she knew she had saved their kingdom!
~The End~
Absolutely great style. Keep it up.
Superb! Keep writing.
Very nice. Go ahead and keep writing .I also like the style.